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PostSubject: Shigma Template   Sat Jan 02, 2010 8:57 pm

~Basic Info~

● Name: Kura (No Last Name)

● Alias: Lazy-Kura

● Age: 200

● Appearance Age: 16

● Age Of Death:14

● Gender:Male

● Squad: Squad 5

● Appearance: Kura stands at 5'6 and wears a t-shirt, baggy jeans and wear sunglasses

● Personality: Kura is shy, a little bit rough and likes to stay quiet

~Zanpakuto Information~

● Name:kaimei yamainu (meaning darkness wolf)

● Release Phrase: rise...... yamainu
● Zanpakuto Family:Dark

● Sealed Appearance: yamainu is a long sword wrapped in a flame like gauze




● Manifestation Appearance: http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs39/f/2008/320/7/4/Dark_Wolf_commission_by_Angela_T.jpg

● Shikai Appearance: http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif?o=9

● Shikai Ability:kura can move a incredible speeds and is able to find his enemy's quickly

~History/RP Sample~

● History: Kura died when he was riding with his dad to the park and were in a car accident

● RP Sample:


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[Only for Captains, And Vice captains]

-Bankai-

● Bankai Name:Kage Okami-ou (shadow king wolf)

● Bankai Zanpakuto Appearance: http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif?o=16

● Bankai Character Appearance: kura has a long coat with some purple fire in some spots he also has shoes that give him more speed(the shoes are made with fire at the heel , when he wants to run the heel lights up and gives him a boost)

● Bankai Ability:kura can defeat 40 hollows just with 1 swing,if he hit something with the spikes it will numb it Eg:he hit someone on the arm numbed, he can travel a long distance and make a clearing with his shoes
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PostSubject: Re: Shigma Template   Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:49 pm

Soo..are you done?

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PostSubject: Re: Shigma Template   Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:54 pm

yea
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PostSubject: Re: Shigma Template   Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:15 pm

This app is really not that good enough for a captain, or vice captain position..I don't even think you would even get approved on most sites with it, try adding more detail, and a roleplay sample.

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PostSubject: Re: Shigma Template   Sun Jan 03, 2010 8:29 pm

needs:
-Longer History (add some arcs)
-Rp Sample
-Edit Bankai ability (too OP)
-Add details to shikai & Bankai (Explain why they do what they do and such)
-Lengthen Appear (a little to short and minorly vague)
-Extend Personality


These are what i have taken notice to, before you can become approved you will have to edit these areas. If your character is still weakly made but ends up being okay enough for approval you will become a normal shinigami.Thank You. Good Bye.
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